The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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proporttions

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proportions

proportion

of

first year

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English

teachers

and French

teachers

in

Onterio

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Ontario

in considering the year of graduation from 2001 to 2007.

Overall

, the trend of

English

teachers

declined from 2001 to 2007.

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, the

recruitement

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recruitment

of French

teachers

increased slightly over the period. The graduates from 2001 and 2002, have deteriorated the

recruitment

of both

teaches

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around 10%

English

teaches

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teachers

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and 20% French

teachers

.

However

, the rate of

English

teachers

recruitment

continuesly

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continued

dropped

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to 40% in 2003 and

then

steadly

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steadily

rose

near

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45% in 2005 and reached it is lowest which was just below 30% in 2007. When considering French

teachers

, the rate of

employement

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employment

rose unevenly from 2002 to 2006

then

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reached it is

highest

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point (nearly 70%). The rate of

recruitment

for both graduates

has

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inclined

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2003 to 2005 and

then

decline

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next

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year.

In contrast

,

English

teacher's

recruitment

declined in 2002 to 2003,

while

French

teachers

were increased.