The table below give information about sales of fairtrade labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables illustrate about
transaction
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and Fix the agreement mistake
transactions
bananas
between 1999 and 2004 in European countries: The UK
, Switzerland
, Denmark
, Belgium, and Sweeden
.
Correct your spelling
Sweden
To begin
with
Fairtrade coffee selling in the Add a comma
with,
UK
had the highest value in 2004 by
20 Change preposition
apply
million
euros
, and that saw a significant growth from the beginning at 1.5 million
euros
in 1999. Then
, Switzerland
was the second country who
had big numbers of sales, which is the highest in 1999 Correct pronoun usage
that
by
3 Change preposition
at
million
euros
, and had
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
rising to 6 Correct article usage
apply
million
euros
in 2004. Furthermore
, Denmark
and Sweden experienced slight increases of 0.2 million
euros
each in
1999 to 2004. Change preposition
from
However
, Belgium had revenue by 1 million
euros
in 1999, and become
larger to 1.7 Wrong verb form
became
million
euros
in 2004.
On the other hand
, Switzerland
shows huge numbers and the highest market of
selling Change preposition
for
bananas
by
15 Change preposition
from
million
euros
in 1999 to 47 million
euros
in 2004. Followed by, the UK
was the second who had
Wrong verb form
have
big
transaction of Add an article
a big
bananas
by
5.5 Change preposition
apply
million
euros
in 2004. Nonetheless
, Belgium had a big grow
from 0.6 Replace the word
growth
million
euros
to 4 million
euros
in 2004. However
, Sweden and Denmark
show different changes which had declining of
selling Change preposition
in
bananas
. Sweden had 1.8 million
euros
to 1 million
euros
. Then
, Denmark
had 2 million
euros
to 0.9 million
euros
between 1999 and 2004.
In summary, the sales of both products increased in most countries, with the UK
and Switzerland
shows
significant growth between 1999 and 2004.Wrong verb form
showing
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bananas, uk, switzerland, denmark, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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