You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you in regard to the staff development of my company that was placed
last
week in your hotel. All the participants agree that the theatre where we had the meeting was amazing, the chairs were very comfortable, and Linking Words
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something incredibly important as we spent 14 hours sitting there. Linking Words
In addition
, everyone is very thankful for your kind staff, we very much appreciate the good treatment.
Unfortunately, the food was very disappointing. The menu that was organised for the event was Linking Words
meat
accompanied by potatoes and vegetables. The Use synonyms
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arrived cold and it was too raw, Use synonyms
besides
that, the potatoes were cold and not cooked enough. Linking Words
However
the menu was not as good as expected, your hotel offers a wide range of wines, which was fascinating as we are all wine lovers.
I would suggest that the Linking Words
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meat
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Also
give more attention to serving the plates as soon as are ready, so people can eat Linking Words
while
the food is still warm.
I appreciate your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jimena IlariaLinking Words
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