The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plan for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and to make comparisons where relevant to this data
The given maps illustrate the centre of the small city named Islip in the present and in the future after its reconstruction.
Overall
, a dual carriageway, two new housing areas, a bus station, a shopping centre, a car
park
and a pedestrian will be built.
Additionally
, the school, housing areas, parks and
shops
will be not changed.
Also
, the main roads,
shops
and countryside will be removed. It is clearly seen that a dual carriageway will be constructed.
Then
, the countryside will be removed in the north.
Also
, the
shops
will be replaced by a bus station, a shopping centre, a car
park
and a new housing area in the north. It is obvious that the main roads will be replaced by pedestrians in the north.
However
, the
shops
near the main roads will remain unchanged.
Subsequently
, the
park
, two housing areas and school will be not modified in the south.
Moreover
, a new housing zone will be made in the south near the
park
.
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