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task achievement
Clearly state your position on cloning in the introduction and ensure it aligns with your arguments throughout the essay. This will enhance your task achievement by making your position clearer to the examiner.
coherence cohesion
Organize your essay with clearly defined paragraphs that each discuss one main idea or argument. This will improve the logical structure of your writing and help the reader follow your arguments more easily.
task achievement
Include more relevant and specific examples to support your points. Examples should clearly illustrate and strengthen your arguments.
task achievement
Focus on improving sentence variety and clarity to make your ideas more comprehensible. Short, clear sentences can help convey your ideas more effectively.
coherence cohesion
Incorporate smooth transitions between ideas and paragraphs to enhance the essay's coherence and cohesion.
task achievement
The essay presents a viewpoint that differentiates between cloning humans and animals, which indicates an understanding of the complexity of the topic.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the writer's opinion on the topic, which helps reinforce the essay's main argument.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite