The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons whare relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of car thefts per 1000 vehicles across four different countries(Great Britain, Sweden, France, and Canada) over a nine-year
period
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from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
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, Great Britain consistently recorded the highest car theft rate throughout the
period
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,
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Sweden experienced
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steady growth.
in contrast
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, France and Canada maintained relatively stable and significantly lower figures over the nine years.
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, in 1990, Sweden began at approximately 9% and showed a steady rise, reaching about 13% by the end of the
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. France,
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, experienced minor variations, fluctuating between around 6% and 8%.
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, Canada followed a comparable trend but saw a slow decline, reaching 5% before stabilizing for the remainder of the
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.
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, Great Britain exhibited notable fluctuations in vehicle theft rates, ranging from approximately 18% to 20% in the early years, before experiencing a gradual decline during the latter part of the
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. Despite
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decrease, it consistently had the highest car theft figures among the four countries.
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