Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what the problem is suggest solutions to the problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing regarding the
work
which has been processed at Steels Avenue near Brampton downtown since last
week. It is quite annoying now and I would file a complaint about this
.
By profession, I am a professor and teaching at Sheridan College on the Brampton campus. I usually take in-campus and off-campus classes as well as
provide private tutoring at residence.
Moreover
, timing from 7 am to 2 pm would not bother me, because I spend that time at the institute but the problem started after 3 pm because it is the time when I start teaching lessons to students after college. There are almost 25 learners who are suffering the same problem as me, due to
the loud noise of the construction work
.
At last
, I would suggest you modify the working hours of the workers,
and start Remove the comma
apply
work
early in the morning because people usually go to work
and most of the houses nearby might be empty. Therefore
, the work
might be finished before time.
I hope you will consider this
and come up with a possible solution.
Yours faithfully,
Harpreet Kaur.Submitted by harpreet291kaur on
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complete response
In the task achievement, your response addresses all parts of the prompt clearly. Consider providing more specific suggestions to enhance your argument, such as suggesting specific quieter hours for construction.
suitable writing tone
Your letter's tone is professional and suitable for a complaint letter to the council. Just ensure to always keep a polite tone even when raising complaints.
logical structure
For coherence and cohesion, the logical structure of your letter is mostly clear. Ensure smooth transitions between paragraphs for even better clarity.
greeting and closing
You did well in maintaining a greeting and closing. This clearly fits the formal context.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph developed a single idea effectively. Try to explore deeper insights or reasoning within each idea for a higher score.
complete response
Your letter includes all necessary components: introduction, explanation of the problem, and a suggestion, which are clearly presented.
suitable writing tone
The tone of your letter is polite and professional, which is appropriate for the audience and purpose.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are properly aligned with the formal style expected in such communications.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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