The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The bar chart illustrates the rates of estimated illiteracy across the globe in six specific areas broken up by gender in 2000.
Overall
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, the level of illiteracy among women is higher compared to men.
It is clear that
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the highest number of illiterate people live in South
Asia
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, Arab states, and Sub-Saharan Africa,
while
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the lowest number of them reside in East
Asia
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/Oceania, Latin America/Caribbean, and developed countries. Focusing first
at
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the area with the highest percentage of illiteracy, more than 50% of females living in South
Asia
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and Arab states didn't know how to write and read,
whereas
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in
Sub-Saharah
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Sub-Saharan
Africa
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figure was marginally lower. Regarding males, the number of them without the
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knowledge associated with reading and writing was roughly 20% lower there in 2000. As for the remaining countries, in 2000, the proportions of illiterate female inhabitants in East
Asia
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/Oceania and Latin America/Caribbean were 20% and 10%, respectively,
while
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for males, the corresponding figures were nearly the same, with approximately 10% of citizens. With respect to developed countries, almost all people residing
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this
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region were literate.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • literacy rates
  • gender gap
  • regional disparities
  • socio-economic factors
  • male literacy
  • female literacy
  • overviews
  • notable differences
  • highest literacy regions
  • moderate literacy regions
  • lowest literacy regions
  • estimated data
  • educational attainment
  • cultural influences
  • development levels
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