The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart illustrates the level of world literacy in six different regions for males and females in 2000.
Overal
, the annual level of citizens Correct your spelling
Overall
tought
how to write was higher among men. Correct your spelling
taught
It is clear that
the highest number of literate people lived in South Asia
, Arab States, and Sub-Saharah
Africa, Correct your spelling
Sub-Saharan
while
the lowest in
East Add a missing verb
was in
Asia
/Oceania, Latin America/Caribbean, and developed countries.
Focusing first on those countries with the vast majority of literate
population, around 50 to 55 of males in South Add an article
the literate
Asia
and Arab
States had writing skills, Correct article usage
the Arab
while
for females the corresponding figure was nearly 20 people lower. As for Sub-Saharah
Africa, the proportion of literacy among men Correct your spelling
Sub-Saharan
amd
women there was below 50 and exactly 30 Correct your spelling
and
percent
, respectively.
As for the remaining areas, in developed Change the spelling
per cent
countries
almost none of Add a comma
countries,
citizens
knew how to write. With regard to Latin America/Caribbean and East Add an article
the citizens
Asia
/Oceania, nearly 10 of their inhabitants of both genders were literate. However
, for Oceania
Add a comma
Oceania,
this
figure was twice as higher
for men.Correct word choice
high
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