The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The bar chart illustrates the level of world literacy in six different regions for males and females in 2000.
Overal
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, the annual level of citizens
tought
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taught
how to write was higher among men.
It is clear that
the highest number of literate people lived in South
Asia
, Arab States, and
Sub-Saharah
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Sub-Saharan
Africa,
while
the lowest
in
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East
Asia
/Oceania, Latin America/Caribbean, and developed countries. Focusing first on those countries with the vast majority of
literate
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the literate
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population, around 50 to 55 of males in South
Asia
and
Arab
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the Arab
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States had writing skills,
while
for females the corresponding figure was nearly 20 people lower. As for
Sub-Saharah
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Sub-Saharan
Africa, the proportion of literacy among men
amd
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and
women there was below 50 and exactly 30
percent
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, respectively. As for the remaining areas, in developed
countries
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countries,
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almost none of
citizens
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the citizens
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knew how to write. With regard to Latin America/Caribbean and East
Asia
/Oceania, nearly 10 of their inhabitants of both genders were literate.
However
, for
Oceania
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Oceania,
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this
figure was twice as
higher
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high
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for men.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • literacy rates
  • gender gap
  • regional disparities
  • socio-economic factors
  • male literacy
  • female literacy
  • overviews
  • notable differences
  • highest literacy regions
  • moderate literacy regions
  • lowest literacy regions
  • estimated data
  • educational attainment
  • cultural influences
  • development levels
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