The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the divorce percentages in two different European countries, namely Finland and Sweden from 2011 to 2015.
Overall
, there is a fluctuating number between 2011 to 2015 in these two countries. Linking Words
Firstly
, the divorce rates in Finland decreased from 2011 to 2012, Linking Words
although
, it experienced upward from 2012 to 2015. Linking Words
Secondly
, the total of break-up cases in Linking Words
this
country from 2011 to 2015 was about over 30% to around 40%. It started from nearly 40% in 2011 Linking Words
then
decreased to almost 30% in 2012, but it continued improving to over 40% from 2012 to 2015. Linking Words
However
, the count of divorces tended to be stable in the two Linking Words
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years, from 2014 to 2015.
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On the other hand
, the number of household separations in Sweden experienced downward from 2012 to 2015, but the count increased from 2011 to 2012. Linking Words
Moreover
, the average percentage was always over 40% to 50% from 2011 to 2014, except in 2015, it was under 40%, the smallest percentage in all the years.Linking Words
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