The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the
percentage
of divorces in two different countries, Use synonyms
Finland
and Use synonyms
Sweden
between 2011 Use synonyms
until
2015.
Correct word choice
and
Overall
, Linking Words
Finland
experienced Use synonyms
a
upward trend Change the article
an
while
Linking Words
Sweden
showed Use synonyms
the
downward trend Correct article usage
a
throughout
2011 until 2015. Both, Change preposition
from
Finland
and Use synonyms
Sweden
had the same fluctuations Use synonyms
divorce
rates. Change preposition
in divorce
Although
Linking Words
Finland
had Use synonyms
the
lower rate than Correct article usage
a
Sweden
between 2011 Use synonyms
untul
2014, Correct your spelling
and
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
Linking Words
at
the end, Change preposition
in
Finland
had Use synonyms
higher
rate than Add an article
a higher
Sweden
in 2015.
Use synonyms
Sweden
's Use synonyms
divorces
rate was about above 40% in 2011, the it increased to almost 50% in 2012. Change the noun form
divorce
Linking Words
However
the Add a comma
However,
percentage
became lower from 2013 to 2015. The Use synonyms
percentage
showed a gradual decrease to about 47% in 2013Use synonyms
,
and continued Remove the comma
apply
decreased
Change the verb form
to decrease
about
10% each year from 2014 to 2015. The Change preposition
by about
percentage
was about under 50% in 2014. But Use synonyms
at the end
of Linking Words
period
, reached around 45% in 2014 and decreased to 37% in 2015.
Add an article
the period
Use synonyms
Percentage
of divorces in Finald was less than 40% in 2011, Correct article usage
The percentage
then
it decreased to about 33% in 2012. But it became increased during the next two Linking Words
year
. It was about almost 40% in 2013, Fix the agreement mistake
years
then
it increased by around 3% in 2014, and like had Linking Words
consistent
Add an article
a consistent
percentage
in 2015.Use synonyms
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