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Summarize the changes in the layout of the Woodwards University.

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The maps
provides
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 information about the new constructions in the layout of the Woodwards University over the period 37 years, starting from 1985.
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, It is important to underline that in 1985 most buildings
was typically came
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 down mainly roads
whereas
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present day
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 constructions expanded and
build
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 new directions for any buildings. Looking at the
detail
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, science laboratory
building
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buildings
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in
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nowadays seem replaced three buildings related to exact science
such
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 as physics , chemistry, and biology blocks. In 1985 ,
car
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 park was demolished to make
lecture
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the lecture
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threatre
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theatre
in
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 the eastern side of the map.
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 , in the southeast which placed Admin Building
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 but miniaturized to erect footpaths. When it
cones
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 to
northwest
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the northwest
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 and southwest sides of the map
also
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experinced
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experienced
high
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 number of constructions. Before,
library
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the library
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 and
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center
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placed
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in
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the
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northwards,
building
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 was only the
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 to
library
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.
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,
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 place the name of
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shuttke
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 bus terminal's building ahead,
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this
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of this
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 place was positioned car park in 1985, knocked down to make
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 single building.
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As well as
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,
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 roads
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 expanded
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in
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nowadays.
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coherence cohesion
Work on improving sentence structure and fixing grammatical errors to help create a more polished response. This will also contribute to better coherence and cohesion.
coherence cohesion
Try to provide a conclusion summarizing the main changes or an overall impression, which can enhance the introduction-conclusion linkage.
coherence cohesion
Provide clear connections between points using linking words or phrases to improve logical flow.
task achievement
Expand on specific examples to better illustrate the changes. Using specific facts or numbers when available can make your points more convincing.
task achievement
The essay adequately describes the changes over the time period with relevant examples, showing an understanding of the task.
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A good attempt is made to address all parts of the task, covering different areas of change.
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The introduction of the essay gives a clear overview of the main changes happening over the years, which sets the stage for the main body.

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