The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.

The pie chart represents the types of careers that Antropology graduates after completing their Bachelor’s degree course from one University. The table displays the wages after five years of working in this particular field.
The pie chart gives data on the variety of careers pursued by Anthropology students after their Bachelor's graduation. The table illustrates how much money they gain after 5 years.
Overall
, it is evident that the highest proportion of graduates' destinations is full-time
work
,
whereas
part-time and postgrad study comprises the lowest.
Furthermore
, freelance
consultants
, who gain $75,000 by $100,000, and the
government
sector
(salary is $100,000) account for the significant part,
while
this
figure for people salaries is $25,000 and 49,999 in freelance
consultants
and
government
sector
is the lowest. Looking in more detail, the highest destination rate is observed in full-time
work
at 52%,
while
this
figure for part-time
work
and postgrad study is around 5%.
In addition
, the percentage of unemployed is lower than part-time
work
at 12% compared to 15%.
However
, the ratios of full-time postgrad study and unknown destination are the same at 8%. Regarding
the
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salaries, graduates who get more than $100.000 are the dominant in most categories at 50% in the
government
sector
, and at 40% in the freelance
consultants
, except for private companies.
Additionally
, the lowest value for freelance
consultants
is $25,000-49,000 class at 5%.
However
, the proportions of
$
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25,000-49,999 and $50,000-74,999 groups are almost the same for the
government
sector
and freelance
consultants
at 5% and 15%, respectively. Unlike other types of employment, wages in private companies experience extraordinary trends as the most significant proportion is $50,000-74,999 at 35%, followed by $100,000+ at 30%, and other categories.
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