THE graph bolow givas information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
arrivng
Correct your spelling
arrival
number
of international tourists
around four different countries worldwide over a period
of 15 years.
Overall
, all countries recorded an increasing
. Replace the word
increase
While
the USA was the primary destenation
for tourist arrivals over the whole Correct your spelling
destination
period
, France also
showed a dramatically rising.
To begin
with, the USA started as
the highest Change preposition
with
number
logged in 1995 by
70 Change preposition
with
tourists
then
rose to the
peak of 90 in 2005, Correct article usage
a
afterward
, saw only a small drop to 85 Change the spelling
afterwards
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
tourists
, where the
France reached its peak Correct article usage
apply
at the end
of the period
shown, after starting from 30 and recording 60 and 70 tourists
in 2000 and 2006, respectevily
.
On the other side, Egypt and Brazil showed a similar pattern over the 15-year Correct your spelling
respectively
period
, with
starting by under Change preposition
apply
than
10 Change preposition
apply
in
the beginning of the Change the preposition
at
period
and did
not Verb problem
apply
exceed
20 for the rest. Wrong verb form
exceeding
by contrast
, Malaysia increased gradually with a recording of 30 differance
between 1995 and 2005 Correct your spelling
differences
number
, starting from 20 to 50 tourist arrivals.Submitted by danall1kat on
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