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THE graph bolow givas information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph provides a comparison of international
tourist
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arrivals
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 to four different countries worldwide over a 15-year
period
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, from 1995 to 2010.
Overall
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, all countries experienced a growth in
tourist
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arrivals
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. Notably, the USA stood out as the primary destination for tourists throughout the entire
period
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,
while
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 France demonstrated a significant surge in
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arrivals
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. In 1995, the USA had the highest number of
tourist
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arrivals
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 with 70 million visitors, peaking at 90, before experiencing a slight decline to 85
tourist
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arrivals
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. Meanwhile, France showed a dramatic inline over the
period
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 shown, starting at 30
tourist
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arrivals
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, rising to 60 in 2000 and 70 in 2005. eventually, both countries equalized with similar numbers of
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arrivals
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at the end
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 of the timespan.
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, Egypt and Brazil exhibited a similar pattern in
tourist
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arrivals
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, starting with fewer than 10 million in 1995 and remaining below 20 throughout the whole
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. Malaysia,
on the other hand
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, showed a gradual increase, adding 30 million visitors between 1995 and 2010, rising from 30 to 50.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourist, arrivals, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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