You have learned about a position in Australia that is available within the company you currently work for and you want to apply. Write a letter to the head of human resources in your office. In your letter:- - say why you are applying for this position. - explain what you currently do for the company. - explain why you would be suitable for this position.

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Dear Mrs James, I am writing to express my interest in the position currently available in
Australia
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office, as advertised internally within the company. I am keen to apply for
this
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role as I believe it would be an excellent opportunity for my personal growth and to contribute to the organisation on an international level. At present, I am working as a sales associate in the retail department, where I am responsible for assisting customers, managing stock, and ensuring smooth daily operations. Over the past two years, I have developed strong communication and problem-solving skills,
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the ability to work effectively in a team. I believe I would be a suitable candidate for
this
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position
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my experience, dedication, and
my
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education. I am highly motivated, quick to learn, and confident in my ability to handle new challenges. I would be grateful if you
consider
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my application. I look forward to your prompt
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Yours faithfully, Marie

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Add one more clear reason for why you want the job in Australia.
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Say a bit more about your work now, with one more detail.
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Finish the last line better: write 'I look forward to hearing from you.'
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Use 'the Australia office' or 'the office in Australia'.
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Make the last paragraph a little longer so your ideas feel more full.
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You answered all three parts of the task.
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The tone is polite and right for a work letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter is easy to follow from start to end.
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Each paragraph has one main idea.
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