The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ìThe table shows how British
men
and women
who were not working spent their time in the morning and afternoon
last
year.
Overall
we can see that there is Correct article usage
a lots
lots
of difference in how Correct quantifier usage
lot
men
and women
spend their time but with greater
percentage Correct article usage
a greater
people
doing more production tasks in the morning. Activities Change preposition
of people
such
as housework, shopping and looking for employment were about two times more popular in the morning than the
Change preposition
in the
afternoon
.
However
, both
men
and women
prefer leisure activity
in the Fix the agreement mistake
activities
afternoon
such
as reading, watching TV, visiting friends or simply sitting around. It is also
interesting to note that women
were more likely to do housework and do
shopping than Unnecessary verb
apply
men
in both
the morning and the afternoon
, while
men
were seven times more likely to spend time being active with activities such
as decorating and gardening, do
Wrong verb form
doing
sport
and go walking.
Numbers were fairly similar for the other activities with 8% of Fix the agreement mistake
sports
both
men
and women
with
staying in bed and 5% and 7% respectively visiting town in the morning. Change preposition
apply
Finally
, the percent
of people drinking was fairly small in Replace the word
percentage
both
the morning and afternoon
with slightly more men
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