Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

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Animal testing for scientific reasons is still very common today. For some

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the harm

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animals

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does not justify the experimentation. Others see it as

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is a very difficult situation but that there are some alternatives. It is normal for new medicines

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tested on

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, We experimentate so that we know that the medicine is safe before it is used on

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is justified as without it many medicines would not

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today.

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case it even is not justified and that

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are very different to

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so the tests are not useful. Another type of testing is for cosmetics. Because lots of beauty

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are still tested on

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is not just and we do not need to make

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and still make similar

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. There are some alternatives to testing

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. Some scientists develop new ways

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using cells. Many

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argue that these ways are good but that there is no animal cruelty. in

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I would argue that animal testing for medicinal purposes could be

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if there is no alternative. The medicine may save lots of

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dying. Animal testing for beauty

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is not acceptable and we should have new ways of test.

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Develop each argument more thoroughly. Provide additional specific examples or evidence to strengthen the essay.

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introduction conclusion present

The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing the discussion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

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