The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the modifications made to the design of the school in 1985 and now.
Overall
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, It is clear from the maps that there have been significant changes occurring throughout the given period to accommodate more students. The number of
classrooms
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has been increased and a fitness
centre
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and pool were introduced
along with
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computer rooms.
According to
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the maps, in 1985, there were two areas for car parking but pulled down to one car park on the northern side. In the south, the playing field in 1985 was redeveloped by reducing its area and adding a pool and fitness
centre
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. The office remained the same in both the years
whereas
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the library was renovated into a learning resources
centre
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, computer room and
classrooms
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which are on the left side of the map. On the right side, 2-storey
classrooms
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were made bigger and became 3-storey
classrooms
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with an additional classroom.
However
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, the current map added new facilities
such
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as a pool, fitness
centre
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, extra
classrooms
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and computer rooms to fill more students. The strength of students in 1985 was 1500 and now it's 2300.
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