The chart below gives attendance figures for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the number of visitors
in
Grandville Stadium in 2017 and 2020 compared to the projected attendance figures in 2030 after the completion of a major improvement in 2019. Change preposition
to
Overall
, sporting events had the highest spectators
and showed a marginal ascending trend, Correct quantifier usage
number of spectators
while
theater
Change the spelling
theatre
show
Fix the agreement mistake
shows
became
the smallest number of audiences.
Looking in more detail, athletic events comprised the majority of attendance numbers, making up almost 150 Verb problem
had
thousand
of the total in 2017 and increase
slightly in 2020. Wrong verb form
increasing
Moreover
, it is projected to continue rising, reaching the
peak of around 16 Correct article usage
a
thousand
supporters in the stadium by 2030.
Similarly
, theater
performances are expected to gain more viewers after the building improvements, showing an upward trend despite having a minor portion, with fewer than 50 Change the spelling
theatre
thousand
attendees over the years. On the other hand
, although
concerts
audiences accounted for half of 50 Change the noun form
concert
thousand
in 2017 and rose insignificantly in 2020, it is predicted that the total of enthusiasts will skyrocket by more over
ten Change preposition
than
thousand
in 2030.Submitted by nineband9s on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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