Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In the present world, the economic condition is getting better.

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inequality is still high, especially in developing countries. One of the inequality cases is shown in the big

wage

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gap

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among employees. The

wage

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gap

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reflects bad governance and

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creates social

problems

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in the community.

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analysis will

highlights

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the reason

of

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the importance

in

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eliminating

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wage

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gap

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. Everyone has the right to have a fair and

decent paid

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job

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. But, in reality, social norms and stigmas often

causes

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the difference

of

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wage

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levels.

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, despite the increasing number of female labour force participation over the decades,

problems

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still appear. One of the

problems

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is the high

wage

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gap

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, especially for women. Unfortunately, most

of

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the

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developing countries only

focuses

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in

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increasing the number of female workers

but

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not

to improve

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the quality.

Addtionally

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, the social stigmas that are given to

female

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females

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rise

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the difficulty for them to get a formal

job

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. The difference

of

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wage

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level for the same

job

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position indicates

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discrimination.

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discrimination could occur among gender, age group, ethnicity, religion, or other conditions.

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, a study in

United

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States showed that black people tend to have lower

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wage

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wages

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compared to white people.

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, the study

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found that people in rural

area

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are more likely to work in informal

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job

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jobs

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that have a lower income. If

this

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condition

persist

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, it will trigger social conflict in the community. The big

wage

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gap

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is one of the indicators of social

problem

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problems

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in the community. It violates

the

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human

right

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rights

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and indicates any

discrimation

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discrimination

which could

hindered

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economic development.

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,

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this

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problems

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will increase the potential

of

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social tension. In order to mitigate those

problems

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, the government should focus on improving the quality of workers and provide relevant regulations that ensure

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equal

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wage

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for everyone.