The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items

in five different countries in 2002.
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The table compares the information about five countries and in what aspects they spent their money in 2002.
Overall
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while
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in Turkey the highest figures were for food,drinks,and tobacco,in other countries
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To begin
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with,in Turkey and in Ireland the biggest index was meal at about 32,14% and at 28,91%.In clothes were the same at 6,63% and at 6,43%. And in education or leisure were just at 1,35% and at 2,21%.
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, in Italy, the food score was 16,36%,and in Sweden, it was a little less at 15,77%.Apparel was twice as little at 9% and 5,40%.Education was the same at 3,21%,in Italy and in Sweden.The
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country was Spain the average level was 6,51% in footwear, twice as much was provender at 18,80%, and the smallest was leisure near to 2%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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