Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think that this is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both view points and give your opinion.

Making an effort to make

connection

Add an article

a connection

the connection

show examples

to other

planets

whereas

Correct word choice

whether

show examples

there is an intelligent life or not, has been a vital topic of debate.

While

some people believe that scientists should make an effort to

connet

Correct your spelling

connect

to other

planets

, some individuals would argue that it might lead to harmful consequences

such

as

waste

Wrong verb form

wasting

show examples

an excessive amount of

money

,So both sides of the argument highlight

meanigefull

Correct your spelling

meaningful

points

wich

Correct your spelling

which

show examples

will be discussed, following by my own viewpoint. First of all, making a connection to other

planet

Fix the agreement mistake

planets

show examples

and sending

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

messages, can lead to various benefits.

Therefore

the one significant reason is that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

it can

reavel

Correct your spelling

reveal

travel

various aspects of other

planet's

Change noun form

planets'

show examples

lives.

For instance

, in

current

Add an article

the current

show examples

century,

due to

numerous challenges and

crisises

Correct your spelling

crises

show examples

,

such

as climate change and environmental

desaster

Correct your spelling

disaster

disasters

, it is crucial to experience the potential of living on

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

other

planets

, considering

mars

Capitalize word

Mars

show examples

as an example.

As a result

,

these kind

Change the determiner

this kind

these kinds

show examples

of experiences not only provide testing

Add the preposition

with a

show examples

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

potential of living

Correct your spelling

everywhere

enywhere

Correct your spelling

everywhere

else

instead

of our planet

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

but can

also

lead to

find

Change the verb form

finding

show examples

dramatic

Correct your spelling

answers

show examples

answeres

Correct your spelling

answers

show examples

to excessive questions in

astronomy

Add an article

the astronomy

show examples

field.

On the other hand

, some individuals believe that these efforts can result in detrimental effects.

However

,

these kind

Change the determiner

this kind

these kinds

show examples

of examinations yields various benefits, it might contribute to

financial

Add an article

a financial

show examples

sprain for both governments and

scientist

Fix the agreement mistake

scientists

show examples

as a whole. A prime illustration of

this

is

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

Correct article usage

the encountless

show examples

encountless

Correct your spelling

countless

budget, which has governments funded annually toward

astronomy

Correct article usage

the astronomy

show examples

sector.

Therefore

, some people argue that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

this

amount of

money

can

invest

Wrong verb form

be invested

show examples

in numerous current challenges

such

as poverty, across the globe. By placing more emphasis on an excessive

emount

Correct your spelling

amount

of

money

toward these explorations. It is highlighted that it can invest in other sectors of

societies

Fix the agreement mistake

society

show examples

. In conclusion, it is noticeable that

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

there are various opinions about exerting effort to connect to other

planets

.

Although

some people think that it can be considered as

squendering

Correct your spelling

squandering

amounts of

money

, some individuals agree with

this

trend and believe that these explorations can lead to various benefits for both societies and

human

Fix the agreement mistake

humans

show examples

.I firmly agree with the second viewport and think that these efforts can significantly

amied

Correct your spelling

aimed

at testing the

potentials

Fix the agreement mistake

potential

show examples

of living on

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

other

planets

in

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

urgent situations.