The chart below gives information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The bar charts display the percentages of citizens in Yemen and Italy based on age in 2000 and the prediction for 2050.
Overall
, the growth of citizens in both countries is different, by Yemen will have many productive ages,
while
Italy tends to be overpopulated by elderly
people
. In 2020, Yemen almost had a balanced proportion of older and productive citizens, with children having slightly more at 50.1%.
However
, in the future, the number of kids will decrease significantly and young
people
will take the first place at 57.3%. On the other side, older
people
still being the minority,
although
had increased from 3.6% to 5.7%. Meanwhile, Italy started the population with the majority of young
people
in 2000,
then
the second number came from
people
over 60 years old. Over the next 50 years, it will have a big jump from the old
people
group which had a ratio of 42.3%
although
workers' age still
being
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the first position at 46,2%.
Additionally
, the kiddies have a minor reduction and stay in the
last
position in
this
country.
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