The graph below shows the participation of Australian children in sports outside school hours in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph provides information about the
participation
of Australian Use synonyms
children
in sports outside school hours in 2014.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the most popularity of various Linking Words
sport
among Australian Use synonyms
children
in 2014 was swimming, because the participants of swimming tended to be of various genders in large quantities. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
participation
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
in
another various sports
like Replace the adjective
another various sport
other various sports
football
or Use synonyms
netball
tended to be significantly unbalanced, but for basketball, the participants were almost in the same number between Use synonyms
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
.
The number of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
participation
of Replace the word
participants
australian
Change the capitalization
Australian
children
who Use synonyms
interested
in swimming was about over 10 to 17. It remained Add a missing verb
were interested
steady
Correct article usage
a steady
participant
of Use synonyms
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
. Use synonyms
However
, the participants Linking Words
of
Change preposition
in
football
and Use synonyms
netball
were very significantly different. Use synonyms
Football
had the highest Use synonyms
participation
rate among Use synonyms
boys
, significantly more than any other Use synonyms
sport
. It was 20 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
participant
of Fix the agreement mistake
participants
boys
and about Use synonyms
under
5 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
participant
of Change to a plural noun
participants
girls
. The opposite of Use synonyms
netball
Use synonyms
which
had nearly Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
20 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
participant
of Change to a plural noun
participants
girls
and about 2 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
participant
of Change to a plural noun
participants
boys
. Use synonyms
Netball
was shown as a predominantly Use synonyms
girls
Use synonyms
sport
with high Use synonyms
participation
rates among Use synonyms
girls
. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, basketball had about 5 to 10 each Linking Words
participant
was either Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Correct article usage
a boys
boys
or Fix the agreement mistake
boy
Use synonyms
girls
, with Fix the agreement mistake
girl
boys
having a higher interest compared to Use synonyms
girls
, but the gap isn’t as wide as that in Use synonyms
football
or Use synonyms
netball
. But Use synonyms
unfortunately
there were still about 5 Add a comma
unfortunately,
children
Use synonyms
had
no Correct pronoun usage
who had
interested
in sports.
In conclusion, swimming was the most popular across both Replace the word
interest
gender
, though slightly more Fix the agreement mistake
genders
girls
seem to participate than Use synonyms
boys
. Use synonyms
Football
was the popular Use synonyms
sport
of Use synonyms
boys
, and Use synonyms
netball
was the popular Use synonyms
sport
of Use synonyms
girls
.Use synonyms
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