The graph below shows the participation of Australian children in sports outside school hours in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph provides information about the

participation

of Australian

children

in sports outside school hours in 2014.

Overall

, the most popularity of various

sport

among Australian

children

in 2014 was swimming, because the participants of swimming tended to be of various genders in large quantities.

However

, the

participation

of

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another various sports

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another various sport

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like

football

or

netball

tended to be significantly unbalanced, but for basketball, the participants were almost in the same number between

boys

and

girls

. The number of

participation

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participants

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of

australian

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Australian

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children

who

interested

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were interested

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in swimming was about over 10 to 17. It remained

steady

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participant

of

boys

and

girls

.

However

, the participants

of

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football

and

netball

were very significantly different.

Football

had the highest

participation

rate among

boys

, significantly more than any other

sport

. It was 20

participant

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participants

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of

boys

and about

under

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apply

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5

participant

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participants

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of

girls

. The opposite of

netball

which

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had nearly

to

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20

participant

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participants

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of

girls

and about 2

participant

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participants

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of

boys

.

Netball

was shown as a predominantly

girls

sport

with high

participation

rates among

girls

.

On the other hand

, basketball had about 5 to 10 each

participant

was either

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a boys

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boys

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boy

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or

girls

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girl

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, with

boys

having a higher interest compared to

girls

, but the gap isn’t as wide as that in

football

or

netball

. But

unfortunately

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there were still about 5

children

had

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who had

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no

interested

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interest

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in sports. In conclusion, swimming was the most popular across both

gender

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genders

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, though slightly more

girls

seem to participate than

boys

.

Football

was the popular

sport

of

boys

, and

netball

was the popular

sport

of

girls

.