The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of sunshine hours per year in three major city Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph highlights the data about the standard temperature in the

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month of

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from January to December. The table illustrates the normal time of sunshine in

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several huge cities.

Overall

, the hottest month in

London

and New York is July,

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it is the coolest

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in Sydney.

On the other hand

, the most freezing time for

London

and New York’s population is January, when it is the most boiling period for Sydney’s citizens.

Moreover

, the biggest number of sunshine hours is in New York, but the smallest

one

is in

London

. As shown in the graph, New York and

London

have the same dynamics, but in the first

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the temperature is a bit cooler. They have the pick of

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in July with approximately 23.5 and 29,

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Sydney has it in January with about 26 degrees.

Furthermore

, the main sunny city is the American

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. It has 2,535 hours of sunshine during the year. There

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the Australian area in second place with 2,473 and the British city in third place with 1,180 hours.