The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates information regarding the count of Asian
elephants
in the year between 1997 and 2004.
Overall
, it is crystal clear that India was the place with the highest count of
elephants
,
while
China was at the lowest.
To begin
with, in Cambodia and Laos, the figure of animals present was similar in both years (1800). Interestingly, the estimated population of Asian
elephants
has decreased in the
last
year from its initial figures in almost every place, except Vietnam and Sri Lanka where the statistic of
elephants
remained the same at 1300 and 3000, respectively.
Moreover
, Myanmar was the second-largest Asian elephant population country followed by India with a difference of 2000 in 2004 and 4500 in 1997.
Furthermore
, the number fall from 4000 to 1000 only in Thailand from its starting year. Talking about China, the number of
elephants
there was 500.
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