the charts below give information on the location and type of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are urrently attending.
The charts give a breakdown of the percentages of each location of
dance
classes and the number of pupils in a town in Australia who attend different types of Use synonyms
dance
classes.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the most popular place for playing Linking Words
dance
is private studios and Use synonyms
students
are more tendency to play the Use synonyms
Ballet
Use synonyms
dance
.
Private studios Use synonyms
is
the most popular among Change the verb form
are
students
with about half of the whole percentage. School halls (after school) Use synonyms
and
community halls and other kinds of locations are in the second and third categories with 24 % for the former and 18 % for the latter. College-based studios Correct word choice
apply
is
in the Change the verb form
are
last
category with 10 %.
The Linking Words
students
who are 11 to 16 play modern Use synonyms
dance
more than other kinds of Use synonyms
dance
with more than 500 Use synonyms
students
. The figure is followed by tap and Use synonyms
ballet
Use synonyms
dance
with over 400 Use synonyms
students
and Use synonyms
ballet
, respectively. The other group of Use synonyms
students
is under 11 and plays Use synonyms
ballet
Use synonyms
dance
with 600 Use synonyms
students
which is the largest number. Tap and modern Use synonyms
dance
with over 400 Use synonyms
students
and 300 Use synonyms
students
are Use synonyms
in
the following rate.Change preposition
at
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