The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of films produced by five countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the graph provided compares the number of
movies
produced by five nations in 2007, 2008 and 2009. In general, compared to other nations, A and B countries made the highest cooperation in producing a higher number of
movies
. It is evident from the information supplied that the biggest film producer was nation A which published 90
movies
in both 2007 and 2008, and a slightly lower 80 ones a year later. Yet, by far the most significant change to take place during
this
period was the increase in produced
movies
by nation B from 50
movies
in 2007 and 2008 to 70
movies
in 2009. In stark contrast,
however
, the other countries played the least role in producing
movies
. Having produced less than 20
movies
in all three years, nation A experienced an upward trend in
this
field,
while
nations D and E virtually saw a stable trend.
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