Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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more than casual
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more. We will discuss both sides and I will give you my opinion about
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becoming tired from
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prefer casual
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because they have a
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of free
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to go to see their family and if they have a kid they want to play with them.
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casual
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of disadvantages,
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as less pay. Casual
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that you could be spending to earn more money.
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but not least, in my
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because they pay you a
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of money and I know the
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I will be working every day. But in casual
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you go to
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every day at different hours and that’s
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uncomfortable for me.
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To improve task achievement, provide more specific examples and explanations for the points being discussed. This will make your argument stronger and more convincing.
coherence cohesion
Work on connecting your ideas more smoothly to enhance coherence and cohesion. Consider using more linking words and phrases to clearly relate one point to another.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear main idea and that there is a strong link back to the overall argument in your conclusion.
task achievement
Your essay clearly presents both views regarding full-time and casual jobs, which effectively addresses the prompt.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are appropriately structured, providing a clear start and end to the discussion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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