The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Forton Valley City from 2000 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given maps demonstrate alternatives that happened in Forton Valley town between 2000 and 2010.

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, it was important that the number of facilities increased

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vegetation was destroyed over the period of 10 years.

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the graphs, Sheffield Road, Daisy Road and the shopping centre, in the corner of Sheffield and Daisy roads, at both times were in the same position.

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, in 2000, the City Hall, opposite the mall, and K.G school, next to the City Hall, was replaced by the public library and Forton University in 2010. The pictures illustrate that in 2000, the farmland and the dairy farm, in the south of the shopping centre, were altered by the playground and K.G. school, which had a section for the toy shop in 2010.

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, on the other side of these venues was the car park in 2000;

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in 2010 its sectors rose;

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, in 2000, at the south of the institute was a park;

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, in 2010, it was changed by Versity cafe.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?

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