Some people spend a lot of money on weddings. Why do they do this? Do you think it is good to spend a lot of money on weddings?
A wedding is an important moment in everyone's
life
. Therefore
many people
organize a large wedding event
to fulfil their life
goals. While
some people
spend enough money according to
their abilities and life
priorities.
There are many reasons why some people
spend a lot
of payment on a wedding celebration. First of all, a wedding is a one-day moment that only happens once in a lifetime. This
celebration brings precious memories to someone's life
. The wedding moment is not only about the bride and groom, but also
involves both parties' families, friends, guests, and the culture that must be carried out at a wedding reception. All of those things require a lot
of cash. Secondly
, nowadays, there are many trends in the wedding season, such
as pre-wedding content
. Some people
follow the trends and spend a lot
of money just for the content
. They create photo and video documentation for pre-wedding content
, then
show off the content
to their social media. It is very trending now.
However
, in my opinion, spending a lot
of cash that we get from working hard for an event
is unnecessary. After the wedding event
, there will be many needs that a married couple must have, such
as a house and its contents, a car, other daily necessities, health insurance, and children's education. There are more valuable things than a one-day wedding ceremony that requires payment. Moreover
, some communites
borrow funds from the bank and make instalments to repay the bill. I think it only adds to household problems.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
communities
people
have to be wise in organizing a wedding event
according to
their abilities and priorities. They have to consider many important and valuable things that are needed in life
after marriage.Submitted by imeldarosari6 on
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