The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart compares how the unemployed British people spent their mornings and afternoons
last
year.
Overall
,
women
spent most of their time doing Housework and Shopping in the morning and
afternoon
,
while
men
spent their time on Job Hunting throughout the day. In the morning,
men
do most of the Job hunting than
women
, which is 22% and 16%, respectively.
Whereas
most
women
do the housework in these hours than
men
, accounting for 49% of
women
and only 19% of
men
who do
this
. As for shopping,
men
and
women
are prone to
this
sector, with only a small difference between 20% and 26%, respectively.
However
, 14% of
men
do gardening after the sun peaks into the day than
women
with almost none. The following least voted activities account for less than 10% of the
men
's and
women
's time; Visiting friends or relatives, reading, decorating, etc.
According to
the data, in
afternoon
activities,
women
still do the housework more than
men
's, having 21% and 7%, respectively,
Although
TV, Job hunting, and Visiting friends are almost the same in the
afternoon
with both genders accounting for less than 16%, Shopping tends to be higher in the
afternoon
for
women
, with 17% votes,
whereas
, only 9% of
men
does
this
.
Additionally
, there are still the same amount of
men
who perform gardening at these hours based on the survey. The other
not-mentioned
Correct your spelling
non-mentioned
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activities which are less likely voted only have less than 10% are reading, decorating, walking, etc.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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