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Some say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Advertise plays a major role in our modern economy, it’s one of the biggest powers in
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 system and it is considered a tool to make the market move and counter the effect of deflation. And
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 sides in
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 discussion, have Solid statements and they are right to an extent, For the first opinion who believes that advertising strategy has proven to be successful And had a clear impact on the target audience , they are right and I agree with them but
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 I understand the logic behind the opposite team believes. They see it within our nature that humans tend to get bored as it’s displayed Repeatedly in our daily life that tends to make us lose interest in it , that will certainly make people less affected by it and make it less efficient for the Companies and that will lead to
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 the kind of marketing strategy waste of money and it can lead to a huge loss that you can’t turn something from it .
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 end I want to summarise my point of view in the upcoming points: 1-I see it depends on what product you are selling and if it’s Innovative
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will still be effective . 2-For the ordinary product word of mouth will be way more effective. For me, I don’t trust Ads when see a lot of them I start to move away from it I believe a good product will advertise itself with no need to shuffle it up my Throat with its many ads .
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Try to provide specific examples to support your points, such as real-life advertisements that you find effective or ineffective.
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Ensure each paragraph serves a unique function in supporting your argument. Transition smoothly between discussing the two views and offering your own opinion.
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Your understanding of different perspectives on advertising shows depth of thought.
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You offer a clear personal opinion, which demonstrates critical thinking about the topic.

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