The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about the
stages
that a Monarch butterfly follows during its life.
Overall
, the life cycle is made by
four bigger Change preposition
of
stages
, then
each stage
is divided into other phases. The first stage
is the egg stage
and the last
is the adult one. Between them
there are the larval and the pupal Add a comma
them,
stages
.
First,
eggs are laid down on milkweed and after 14 days they hatch and caterpillars come out. Then
, between the larval and the pupal stages
, the larva attaches to a branch and after a 10 days
period turns into a chrysalis.
The pupal Fix the agreement mistake
day
stage
starts with the emergence of the adult from the chrysalis,
and continues with the migration to the south of the Remove the comma
apply
new born
butterfly . After a 6 months Correct your spelling
newborn
period
the butterfly faces a migration to the north that ends with the mating Add a comma
period,
stage
and the subsequent laying of eggs. Then
the cycle starts again.Submitted by alessandrorepola.repola on
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