The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of the Monarch butterfly. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram gives information about the
stages
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that a Monarch butterfly follows during its life.
Overall
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, the life cycle is made
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four bigger
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,
then
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each
stage
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is divided into other phases. The first
stage
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is the egg
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and the
last
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is the adult one. Between
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there are the larval and the pupal
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.
First,
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eggs are laid down on milkweed and after 14 days they hatch and caterpillars come out.
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, between the larval and the pupal
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, the larva attaches to a branch and after a 10
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period turns into a chrysalis. The pupal
stage
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starts with the emergence of the adult from the chrysalis
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and continues with the migration to the south of the
new born
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butterfly . After a 6 months
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the butterfly faces a migration to the north that ends with the mating
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and the subsequent laying of eggs.
Then
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the cycle starts again.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stages, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • life cycle
  • Monarch butterfly
  • eggs
  • milkweed plants
  • larvae
  • caterpillars
  • feed
  • chrysalis
  • pupa
  • metamorphosis
  • emerge
  • adult butterfly
  • repeat
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