The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the process of producing
ethanol
.
Overall
, it is evident that ethanol
is made from plants
and trees after passing through three main procedures; starting from when they are harvested and being processed in labs. Further
, they will be used as a biofuel by various autos and then
return in the cycle as carbon dioxide to help plants
grow again.
To begin
, it can be said that the main sources for producing ethanol
are trees and plants
. Firstly
, they will be harvested; then
they will be going to be pre-processed and crushed into cellulose afterwards. Secondly
, processing will be made on them chemically to obtain sugar from them.
Furthermore
, microbes will be added to the sugars in order to transform them into ethanol
. It is noteworthy to mention that this
type of fuel is being used by cars, trucks and also
aeroplanes which make carbon dioxide into the atmosphere; consequently
, the carbon dioxide with sunlight will be the energy source for plants
to grow to complete the whole cycle of ethanol
production’s process.Submitted by farr.shad.k on
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