You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the monthly spending in dollars of a family in the USA on three items in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart above depicts
expenditure
per month in Correct article usage
the expenditure
dollars
of a particular family in the USA on three different needs, such
as food, gas, and clothing in 2010. Overall
, it can be seen that all of the items was fluctuated
and it was Change to the active voice
fluctuated
has fluctuated
respresented
by one line in green colour.
Correct your spelling
represented
First,
in January, the family was spending as much as 500 US Dollars
on food. Then
, in the next month, the spending increased to 580 dollars
. After that, they pressed the budget to 420 dollars
and continuously until April to below 400 dollars
.
Besides
that, in January and March, the family was expended around 380 dollars
on gas. Otherwise
, in February, they spend only 320 dollars
. However
, the expenditure on gas was
sharply climbed to 580 Unnecessary verb
apply
dollars
, in April.
On the last
item, at first,
the family budget for clothes just
about 220 Add a missing verb
was just
dollars
. Nonetheless
, the number was dramatically soared to 590 dollars
. Nevertheless
, the budget decreased in March. Later, in April, they bought clothes and spend
more than 600 Wrong verb form
spent
dollars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dollars with synonyms.
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