In some countries good school and medical facilities are available in city only. Some people think that teachers and good hospital, education should be provided in rural areas for few years. While some people think that every person is free to do work according to their choice. Discuss your ideas and opinion. Discuss both the sides.
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facilities
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Your essay introduces the topic and presents two viewpoints but lacks a clear thesis statement that establishes your position clearly.
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You demonstrated awareness of the issues and needs related to education and medical facilities in rural versus urban areas.
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