The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
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The table presents the difference in the
number
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of
people
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who travelled internationally.
This
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includes data from 1990 to 2005.
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, there was an increasing
number
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of
people
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travelling
in
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various continents of the world between 1990 and 2005.
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, the area with the highest
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of travellers was in
Europe
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and the lowest was in the
Middle
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East. In detail,
initially
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in 1990, the greatest figure was in
Europe
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280.2
million
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visitors, and with a difference of about 200
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, America came second. 60.2
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individuals travelled to Asia and the
pacific
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, and 18.2
million
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went to Africa. The least was visitors in the
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East
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roughly 33 times lower than
Europe
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, the total in that year was 448.9
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people
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.
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after 5 years, the ranking of locations
were
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the same from the initial year, the highest was still
Europe
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wherein the
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of travellers increased
at
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390.3
million
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.
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, the figure in America
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inclined to 112.5
million
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, 80.3 came to Asia and the
pacific
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, and the lowest was in the
Middle
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East with 11.3
million
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people
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and the average of international
traveller
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this
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year was 615.2
million
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. In comparison to 2000,
Europe
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remained
to have
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the highest
number
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of visitors with 393.2
million
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and the lowest was the
Middle
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East with only 13.5
million
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people
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, which was 31 times lower than
Europe
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. After half a decade, it continually the
numbers
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number
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of travellers from various
place
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places
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went up,
Europe
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which was the highest gained 400.2
million
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people
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and the lowest, the
Middle
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East with 15.8
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, europe, middle, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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