The map show the lay out of a university campus in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The map illustrates the university
campus
in 2010, and there are several key features which are set out below.
On the north Use synonyms
side
of the Use synonyms
campus
, there were the university offices and a teaching block for Art and Science. Following the path, there Use synonyms
were
the student Correct subject-verb agreement
was
accommodation
and a huge Use synonyms
lake
across it. Moving on the east Use synonyms
side
of the Use synonyms
campus
, there was an enormous field that was built. It was filled up with the Use synonyms
lake
, shops, and other Use synonyms
accommodation
, and a restaurant. The area was filled with trees, and the student Use synonyms
accommodation
on the west Use synonyms
side
was smaller than the ones Use synonyms
in
the west,which Change preposition
on
position
nearer to the Wrong verb form
was positioned
lake
. At the edge of the map, there was a small restaurant that was constructed, and a bit north Use synonyms
side
of it, there were two shops. At the main attraction of the area, the Use synonyms
lake
was filled with a bunch of lawns and seating areas.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
campus
environment was established to provide a great Use synonyms
accommodation
for Use synonyms
students
accessibility.Change noun form
students'
student's
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