The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The line graph provides data on how

much

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shops

were closed and opened in one particular country in the years 2011 and 2018.

Overall

,

while

closures showed a minimal decline over a period,

openings

experienced a downward trend. Of particular note, both of them fluctuated. In the beginning,

openings

leveled

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off

around

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at around

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8,500

shops

, experiencing a significant drop to 4,000 after a year.

However

, they started to rise and reached just over 6,000 markets in 2013. Meanwhile,

openings

fell moderately to 4,000 in 2015.

Although

they declined,

openings

remained the same number of markets until 2016,

then

showing a small growth to just over 4,000. Yet,

at the end

of the period,

openings

of

shops

dropped markedly to 3,000.

Similarly

, closures which stood at about 6,500

shops

in 2011, declined slowly to 6,000. In 2013,

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they increased to roughly 7,100, after a year started to drop to around 6,500

shops

, declining dramatically by about 600 in 2015. But, they rose rapidly to just over 5,000 in 2016.

Additionally

,

while

closures showed a small fall to 5,000 in the next year, they ended with

the

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similar number of

shops

as

2016

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in 2016

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(just over 5,000)in 2018.