The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line chart depicts the amount of cost, which four countries invested in renewable sources of
energy
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in the interval between 1975 and 2000. It is clear from the graph that Switzerland achieved the highest spending.
According to
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what is shown, Switzerland's population
spent
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climbed gradually until it reached 6 dollars per person in 2000 for developing renewable
energy
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sources. Denmark individuals
also
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show attraction to
this
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source of
energy
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, as they spent 1 dollar in the first five years
then
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the number remained steady for the next decade before it rose to nearly 3.5 dollars per person in 2000. Spain and UK
on the other hand
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had declined trend. Both hit 1 dollar in 1980
then
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started to drop. They had significant fluctuation over the years afterwards as they spent a negligible amount of money which was less than 1 dollar per person on
this
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type of
energy
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.
To sum up
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, we could say that Spain
along with
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the UK invested the least amount of money in clean
energy
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sources compared with Switzerland.
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