Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The fact that

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especially in these 2 decades, brought a new era to the world is obvious and we can see

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of

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every day if we compare our lives with

people

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from 30 years ago. As an example, mobile phones themselves had enough impact on our daily life let alone other aspects of

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with, some

people

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argue that advanced tech would ruin our differences in cultures, thoughts and

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by simplifying communication, which results

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people

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from all across the globe

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in contact every day and

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from each other.

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, they claim that

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would cause

people

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to forget about what they already have

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trying to replicate the other stuff that they have learnt.

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, new

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of clothing from another nation, have to celebrate different occasions and basically anything related to culture and heritage.

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, it would give the abusers the upper hand to have negative impacts on

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societies.

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, I think that the advantages of tech are far more than the downsides.

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, if we keep talking about communication, we would

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enormous benefits from

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as

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being able to do

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stuff just from our phones or home computer rather than having to head to the bank or the store to perform a task like deposing money or buying

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; or maybe we are a person who

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emigrated to a far away area and we want to contact our family and friends.

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to

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technology

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we can do

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too without having to travel long distances. In conclusion,

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I understand the concerns about the downsides of

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matter, I believe that it has benefited us much more and to prevent its bad effects, we just need to teach our younger how to use these potentials to their

benefits

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