Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

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Dear Sam, I hope you doing well and are in good spirits. I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about the damage to my vehicle when you

were

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apply

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parked your

car

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in the

alloted

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allotted

allocated

allowed

area. As I

have

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do have

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not a habit of checking my vehicles regularly. But I

forget

Verb problem

left

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my wallet in

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the

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car

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yesterday. To get it from the

car

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, I went there. Where

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I noticed

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the

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front light of my

car

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was broken and there were

also

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some scratches and small dents on the left side of the

car

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which

faint

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fused

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the color as well. I felt sad to

saw

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see

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this

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. You know very well,

this

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car

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was gifted by my parents on my

last

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birthday and it has a great meaning to me.

Due to

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happened

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happened,

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all

this

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made me emotionally depressed and upset. I want you to be careful

for

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apply

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the next time when you

parked

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park

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your

car

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. I do not want to spoil our friendship but try to understand my emotions and feelings towards

this

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car

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. I know

this

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happened

accidently

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accidentally

but I would really appreciate

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it if

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you

cover

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covered

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the repair cost of my

car

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. Hope to hear back from you soon! Warm Regards, Sam.

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task achievement

Consider providing more specific details on how the parking issue will be resolved in the future to enhance task achievement.

task achievement

Review sentence structures for improved grammatical accuracy, particularly regarding verb tenses.

coherence cohesion

Improve paragraph transitions to enhance the logical flow and cohesion of ideas.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for writing to a neighbor and friend.

task achievement

The letter covers all the key points: describing the damage, feelings, and suggested actions.

coherence cohesion

The structure includes a clear greeting and closing.

4
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

201 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

allocating
allotted space
damage
dents
scratches
repairs
responsibility
compensation
convenience
inconvenience
empathy
respect
resolve
mutual understanding
precautionary measures

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