The diagram on the right shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram on the right shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
diagram depicts the process of a solar water-heating system from a modern house. It is clear from the graph that it is a cycling process.
According to
what is shown, the solar planet has two pipes, upper and lower, attached to it. The lower pipe has a check valve and drain cock as it is used for outflow. The substances in
this
tube go to the cylinder where the coil is located after it passes through the pump. At the bottom of the cylinder, cold water comes inside, after that it gets hot by the coil and flows through the top opening and becomes domestic hot water. The coil from the cylinder part continues its way to the overflow vent, where the water tank is
also
located. Following that, the pipe back to the solar planet therebay making a circular system.
To sum up
, we could say that
such
a system protects our environment as it is very efficient and saves energy, especially when
such
a machine depends on solar power as the only external source of power.
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