The diagram on the right shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

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diagram depicts the process of a solar water-heating system from a modern house. It is clear from the graph that it is a cycling process.

According to

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what is shown, the solar planet has two pipes, upper and lower, attached to it. The lower pipe has a check valve and drain cock as it is used for outflow. The substances in

this

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tube go to the cylinder where the coil is located after it passes through the pump. At the bottom of the cylinder, cold water comes inside, after that it gets hot by the coil and flows through the top opening and becomes domestic hot water. The coil from the cylinder part continues its way to the overflow vent, where the water tank is

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located. Following that, the pipe back to the solar planet therebay making a circular system.

To sum up

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, we could say that

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a system protects our environment as it is very efficient and saves energy, especially when

such

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a machine depends on solar power as the only external source of power.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

179 words

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The diagram on the right shows a solar water-heating system from a contemporary home. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Working abroad can help employees earn a great deal of money and gain more benefits. However, some people think this trend has many negative impacts.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children, while others think they should live in homes specially built for old people. Which do you think is a better practice?