The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process of how the
water
cycle happens continuously on
earth
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, occurring both
in
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above
or
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and
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below the surface. In general, the process consists of four distinct stages: evaporation, condensation, precipitation, and infiltration.
First,
water
evaporates from the oceans
due to
the sun’s heat
and
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apply
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contributing to the majority of evaporation. Oceans account for 80% of
total
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the total
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water
vapor
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vapour
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in the air. As the
water
vapor
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rises, it cools and condenses into clouds. When the clouds become saturated, precipitation occurs in the form of rain and snow. The rains will
be fell
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to the ground river lakes,
while
also
providing
water
for plants and trees. Some of the rainwater is absorbed into the soil through numerous layers, becoming groundwater.
Moreover
,
water
that reaches
impervious
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the impervious
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layer drains into the ocean. When freshwater mixes with seawater during intrusion, saltwater is formed, and the hydrological cycle begins again with evaporation.
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