The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
The diagram illustrates the development of salmon from eggs during their life cycle.
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there are three distinct stages illustrated in the process. commencing with producing eggs in the water and ending with the development of a mature salmon.
The first stage is when the eggs, in the upper river (slow moving), are put under the small stones and reeds, which take approximately 5 to 6 months. The next step after that, they become fry (3–8) cm; at Linking Words
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, a small body, fins, and a tail, which can support them to travel a long way. Over time, they live at a lower river (fast flowing) Change the spelling
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they consume food that supports them to grow approximately for 4 years. Correct word choice
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changes to dark blue, and the tail is Correct article usage
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longer. The final stage of the cycle is adult salmon that can be eligible to start different lives, which they can search Linking Words
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their own food for nearly 5 years. Having completed all these steps, the lifecycle will Change preposition
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