The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
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The flow chart illustrates the development of a species of large fish called
salmon
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from an egg throughout its life cycle.
Overall
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, there are three distinct stages in the process, beginning with the production of
eggs
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in the water and culminating in the development of mature
salmon
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. In the first stage, adult
salmon
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lay their
eggs
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on the surface between small stones and under reeds in the upper river (where the water is slow-moving) in order to protect them from fish and birds. After around 5–6 months, the
eggs
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hatch, and fry measuring about 3–8 cm emerge. The fry
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moves to the lower river, where the water flows faster so as
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its journey. They spend four years in
this
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location and gradually develop into smolt which is around 12–15 cm.In the next stage, the smolt migrate to the open sea, where they face challenges to survive and find food. After spending five years in the sea, they mature into adult
salmon
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. Eventually, they return to the upper river for the purpose of laying
eggs
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. Having completed
this
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cycle, the life cycle begins again.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, eggs with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Life cycle
  • Spawning
  • Freshwater
  • Juvenile
  • Fry
  • Adaptation
  • Migration
  • Smolt
  • Rivers
  • Ocean
  • Challenge
  • Growth
  • Return journey
  • Hatching ground
  • Perilous
  • Upstream
  • Obstacle
  • Ecological impact
  • Preservation
  • Disturbance
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