The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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the line graph compares some changes in the
number
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of three kinds of products produced in the Garmen factory over the period of 20 years (19990-2010).
Overall
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, the
number
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of three types of goods increased over the years, indicating the technical advancements.
However
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, the volume of
coats
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, which went up constantly year over year and reached the first rank in the produced figures in the
last
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period. In 1990,
coats
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were the lowest
number
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of products with just 7,5
million
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;
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suits were by far higher and stood at the first rank of production in the German factory at approximately 15
million
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. Over the following 5 years, suits continued to increase dramatically and reached a peak at around 24
million
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,
following
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this
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trend,
coats
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rose significantly and reached the same point as the manufactured dress. Turning to the year 2000, the
number
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of dresses declined slightly to around 11
million
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before going up continuously to around 15
million
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at the end
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of the period. In terms of
coats
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which overtook the volumes production of the suit in 2002 and became the first goods produced in
this
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factory. The rest of the time suits continued to drop to the bottom at around 17
million
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before rebounding
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, coats, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production volume
  • Garment factory
  • Trend (increasing, decreasing)
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Market demand
  • Technological advancements
  • Production capacity
  • Raw material availability
  • Economic conditions
  • Notable observations
  • Significant shifts
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