The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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the line graph compares some changes in the
number
of three kinds of products produced in the Garmen factory over the period of 20 years (19990-2010).
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Overall
, the Linking Words
number
of three types of goods increased over the years, indicating the technical advancements. Use synonyms
However
, the volume of Linking Words
coats
, which went up constantly year over year and reached the first rank in the produced figures in the Use synonyms
last
period.
In 1990, Linking Words
coats
were the lowest Use synonyms
number
of products with just 7,5 Use synonyms
million
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while
suits were by far higher and stood at the first rank of production in the German factory at approximately 15 Linking Words
million
. Over the following 5 years, suits continued to increase dramatically and reached a peak at around 24 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
following
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this
trend, Linking Words
coats
rose significantly and reached the same point as the manufactured dress.
Turning to the year 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of dresses declined slightly to around 11 Use synonyms
million
before going up continuously to around 15 Use synonyms
million
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at the end
of the period. In terms of Linking Words
coats
which overtook the volumes production of the suit in 2002 and became the first goods produced in Use synonyms
this
factory. The rest of the time suits continued to drop to the bottom at around 17 Linking Words
million
before reboundingUse synonyms
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