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The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart and table depict the number of healthcare facilities and average lifespan in different countries. As it is shown in the chart, indicators of the amount of healthcare conditions vary greatly.
Japan
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 has more hospital
beds
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 per thousand of
population
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the population
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 than other countries. Meanwhile, less well-equipped in terms of
health
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 are Canada, Spain and the United States. As for the table, where government
health
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 spending is shown, there is a noticeable difference in the amount of finance that the government provides for maintaining citizens’
health
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. The Japanese state expends much less money than the United States does.
However
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, average life expectancy in
Japan
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 is slightly higher than in the US. In comparison,
Japan
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 has less
health
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 spending per person as the medical program provides more hospital
beds
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. Analysis of the chart and table reveals that
Japan
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 provides 14 hospital
beds
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 per thousand people and the government expenditure is approximately 2500$,
while
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 the US offers only 3 hospital
beds
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 per thousand of population and its spending is significantly higher - 6719$.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, beds, health with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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