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The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant

The table shows the number of universities ranked top 200 in the world in three subjects in five countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table illustrates the top 200
college
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colleges
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 in the world across
three
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 subjects among five different countries. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that most of the best educational
institution
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institutions
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 for these
three
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 subjects are in the US or the UK.
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, the United States
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 confirms its position through the number of its top-ranked schools in both
three
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 types of subjects. In terms of biology, the U.S. with a total of 69 top-ranked schools is the nation which shows its best in education. The figures for the UK the lower but they
also
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 show a significant number of 30 universities comparing the other
three
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 countries
while
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 Australia and Canada have similarities with 9 top-ranked educational
institution
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.
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, New Zealand accounts for the lowest value with the number of top_ranked schools being 6. When looking at the fields of medication and psychology, a similar trend appears.The United States again leads with 54
academy
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 in medicine and 58 in psychology. In their respective order, the UK maintains their efforts with 24 and 29 universities in these sectors respectively.Australia has 13 and 17 institutions in medicine and mental processes but compared to the other two nations it is still higher.Notably, New Zealand has only two universities for medicine but it has an amazing record for psychology with four.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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