The Maps below show the paradise Island in the past and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The Maps below show the paradise Island in the past and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, it is worth noticing the fact that in recent development deforestation has risen. At a fleeting glance in the past, there were only a few entertainment sorts now, there were a plethora of entertainment areas built. There was a natural spring in the past which was now in a small different area. There was a scientific research station and a few coconut trees which are not shown

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present on Paradise

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, on the present map of Paradise

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, the pier size doubled, and an area of permitted swimming appeared. On the opposite to the beach corner, boats were replaced by cruise ships, and right around the circuit of the

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, a cycling path was built. Nowadays, there is a Hotel complex, at the place of the Main scientific station, and it is connected to the open restaurant in the middle of the

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and the BBQ area below. Generally, the number of trees on the

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, unfortunately, decreased, and areas like the swimming pool above the hotel were installed. In conclusion, Paradise

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in comparison to the past map was technicized, and even if certain areas like natural springs, and rocks did not change, other features were replaced and rebuilt.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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The Maps below show the paradise Island in the past and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their works from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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