The Maps below show the paradise Island in the past and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, it is worth noticing the fact that in recent development deforestation has risen.
At a fleeting glance in the past, there were only a few entertainment sorts now, there were a plethora of entertainment areas built. There was a natural spring in the past which was now in a small different area. There was a scientific research station and a few coconut trees which are not shown in
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, the pier size doubled, and an area of permitted swimming appeared. On the opposite to the beach corner, boats were replaced by cruise ships, and right around the circuit of the island
, a cycling path was built. Nowadays, there is a Hotel complex, at the place of the Main scientific station, and it is connected to the open restaurant in the middle of the island
and the BBQ area below. Generally, the number of trees on the island
, unfortunately, decreased, and areas like the swimming pool above the hotel were installed.
In conclusion, Paradise Island
in comparison to the past map was technicized, and even if certain areas like natural springs, and rocks did not change, other features were replaced and rebuilt.Submitted by moon2014angel on
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