The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
Chart
illustrates the proportion of the population who live in modern cities in the Fix capitalization
chart
world
, Africa
, Asia, Europe, Latin America
and north
Capitalize word
North
America
from 1950 to 2030 .
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of population
in urban areas Add an article
the population
increase
throughout the whole frame Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
time
without Change preposition
of time
decrensing
.
Correct your spelling
decreasing
To begin
, in 1950, the proportion of the world
and Africa
was 29% and 15% respectively. The number of people who prefer to live in modern areas in the world
rose
reach a peak at 60% by 2030. Verb problem
will
Similarly
in Add a comma
Similarly,
Africa
grow to 51% in 2030 . furtherover
, Asia Correct your spelling
furthermore
Surpassing
Wrong verb form
will surpass
Africa
at 54%in 2030 .
In detail, the percentage in Europe initially
was 51%in 1950. Then
it Continues Climbed
to 72% in 2007 Change the verb form
to climb
reach
a peak in 2030 at 78%. Correct word choice
and reach
In Contrast
, the proportion in Latin America
at the beginning was 42% then
it Sharply increase
Wrong verb form
increased
at
84% by 2030. The Change preposition
to
last
Continent, north America
, have
the Change the verb form
has
higher
percentage among the Correct word choice
highest
world
and other continents which Started at 64% in 1950 and end
at 87%by 2030.Wrong verb form
ended
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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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