The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wh incere relevant.
The graph illustrates how the proportion of
visitors
changed
in one Caribbean Verb problem
apply
Island
changed from 2010 to 2017 by using millions in all number
, which are divided into two Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
catagories
either staying on Correct your spelling
categories
cruise
ships
or on the island
.
Overall
, mostly
tourists Correct your spelling
most
were
stayed on Unnecessary verb
apply
cruise
ships
at at
the beginning but several years later Change preposition
apply
visitors
were
gradually increased amount of Unnecessary verb
apply
people
stayed
on the Wrong verb form
staying
island
at the end
of the year.
From 2010 to 2016 both trends were opposite with those who stayed on cruise
ships
were greater compared who stayed on the island
. Proportion
of Add an article
The proportion
people
who stayed on the island
from 2013 to 2017 progressively multiplied over time approximately
(0.5-2 Change preposition
by approximately
million
of
tourists respectively ). Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
were
dramatically rose from 2011 close to 0.6 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
to 1.5 million
in 2013 but suddenly dropped a little in 2016 however
, gained the same amount of people
at the end
of the year.
Moreover
, total
Correct article usage
the total
visitors
were
1 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
million
in 2010 and didn't droped
a little Correct your spelling
drop
dropped
throghout
Correct your spelling
throughout
years
and obtained the highest amount of Correct article usage
the years
people
exact
3.5 Change the word
exactly
million
in 2017.Submitted by AL NURE FOYZUR REZA SUPRIO on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, island, cruise, ships, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 6 times.
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